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I've edited this picture of mine [link] to add a new piece to my ' Princess Of Heart' collection!!!
Hope you like this version too:heart:

To see the other princesses of heart go here [link]


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:iconstarwish65:
I personally think this is an excellent piece of art. the coloring and overall drawing is ultimately superb. I think that you can automaticly tell who and what this work of art depicts. i'm just wondering what inspired you to put the flower designs on the corners of the art. I would have thought of pink flowers for someone like Aurora or Cinderella, but not Pocahontas. I think the pose and the body movement of the subject is very flattering and simple. I also like how you faded the image and blew it up in the backround. I love your drawing style and encourage you to keep up the good work.
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:iconkat-anni:
I love this pic!! It's really beautiful done and I'm a fan of Pocahontas, she's my favourite Disney Princess :meow: So I'll write a critique, hope it helps you!

First of all: I haven't seen the movie "Pocahontas" in a long time so bear with me if I'm saying something to be bad when it actually is part of her design ^^; I'll do constructive criticism so first for the positive!

Layout
The style with the copy of the princess in the background fits in the set since you did it with the other pictures as well. The idea is really fitting and the ornaments on the top and bottom underline the "princessstyle"..you know what I mean xD Since Pocahontas is sitting, she is a little bigger then the other princesses but I don't think thats a bad thing or something. I like to see her in big, she's beautiful after all :D
Anatomy and Face
Her face really got beautiful!! I totally like her expression and the way her eyes look and her full lips form a shy smile :) Really great work there! For the anatomy: You also did well there though the waist is really slim but that's because of the Disney-style, I know. The legs got the right length and I just love how her hair flows ^^. Especially the arms are really well formed and even the hand which I think of as being pretty difficult is pretty.
Colouration
The colours in this picture are really well chosen. It's clear to see from where the light comes and the skin shines very beautiful :3 You edited the skin and the clothes in comparison with the old pic, didn't you? It looks better now ^^ I never drew red skin so I suggest it to be pretty difficult since you have to chose the right tones for the shadow and everything. So good job there. The glance of her lips is really sweet and I exactly remember the colour of the necklace and her dress to be like this! Impressive :meow:

Now for the negative. Don't worry, nothing too big xD

Layout
Only thing here is that the ornaments are a little bit pixeled. Could be because of the high resolution of my monitor but it bugs me a little since Pocahontas herself is really sharp :o
Anatomy and Face
The left eye is in my opinion a little bit far away from the nose. And it has a little strange form. Maybe you could let the upper eyelashes form a curve like in the other eye, I guess that would git much better. Plus, the form of her lips is not very common (maybe it's like this in the movie? I don't remember >_<;). I'd let them bow a little downwards in the middle. For the anatomy: The left leg is a bit..fat xP It curve upwards and her knee is strange. Maybe you should let it be behind the other leg a little more and flatten it or something. The same for her left shoulder. I know this perspective half from the side is not easy so I don't really blame you but the shoulder is a bit long and edgy xP It'd be okay if you let the shoulder end under the clothes, you wouldn't see the edge then ^^. Yeah..that's all xD
Colouration
The colour is pretty but not really special. I know many artists who spend hours doing a soft shading and almost making it look real by that. That wouldn't fit in the Disney-style, I know but that's why I don't give you all the points with "technique" because what should the artists with the difficult shading get then? >_< The colour looks good, just an act to animate you to practise and to be fair with other people. I hope you understand ^^

All in all a reaaaly great picture. Even after looking at it for that long I'm not a bit tired of it. Ah yeah, the star I withdraw for "Originality": It's because this is not your character and the pose as well as the background is not soo extraordinary or something. Hope you can understand.
Please excuse my English if it's not so creative but it's not my native language!
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:iconangelasdawn:
oh my gosh this is the CUTEST pic of her ever!!

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thank you much!

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any day

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She looks so cute! I love your style of art :heart:

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thank you so much!

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Welcome :D

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omg i LOVE POCAHONTAS!! it's one of my fave movies and you did such a good job on this!!

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thanx!

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:iconrala-tyria:
I LOVE!! pocahontas!

And i LOVE this pic!! its so beautiful, she looks really innocent and so pretty!

the body is so great! i bet it took years to get where you are!

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thanx!

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