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-- I believe in Jesus Christ as my Saviour and I always will!! Watch my animations:[link] I LOVE!! pocahontas!
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First of all: I haven't seen the movie "Pocahontas" in a long time so bear with me if I'm saying something to be bad when it actually is part of her design
Layout
The style with the copy of the princess in the background fits in the set since you did it with the other pictures as well. The idea is really fitting and the ornaments on the top and bottom underline the "princessstyle"..you know what I mean xD Since Pocahontas is sitting, she is a little bigger then the other princesses but I don't think thats a bad thing or something. I like to see her in big, she's beautiful after all
Anatomy and Face
Her face really got beautiful!! I totally like her expression and the way her eyes look and her full lips form a shy smile
Colouration
The colours in this picture are really well chosen. It's clear to see from where the light comes and the skin shines very beautiful :3 You edited the skin and the clothes in comparison with the old pic, didn't you? It looks better now ^^ I never drew red skin so I suggest it to be pretty difficult since you have to chose the right tones for the shadow and everything. So good job there. The glance of her lips is really sweet and I exactly remember the colour of the necklace and her dress to be like this! Impressive
Now for the negative. Don't worry, nothing too big xD
Layout
Only thing here is that the ornaments are a little bit pixeled. Could be because of the high resolution of my monitor but it bugs me a little since Pocahontas herself is really sharp
Anatomy and Face
The left eye is in my opinion a little bit far away from the nose. And it has a little strange form. Maybe you could let the upper eyelashes form a curve like in the other eye, I guess that would git much better. Plus, the form of her lips is not very common (maybe it's like this in the movie? I don't remember >_<
Colouration
The colour is pretty but not really special. I know many artists who spend hours doing a soft shading and almost making it look real by that. That wouldn't fit in the Disney-style, I know but that's why I don't give you all the points with "technique" because what should the artists with the difficult shading get then? >_< The colour looks good, just an act to animate you to practise and to be fair with other people. I hope you understand ^^
All in all a reaaaly great picture. Even after looking at it for that long I'm not a bit tired of it. Ah yeah, the star I withdraw for "Originality": It's because this is not your character and the pose as well as the background is not soo extraordinary or something. Hope you can understand.
Please excuse my English if it's not so creative but it's not my native language!
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