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Submitted: March 17, 2010
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Ariel-Deep Under...by *nippy13

Fan Art / Cartoons & Comics / Digital / Other

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Blue eyes...

Inspired by the colors of this wonderful pic

Remember?It's Ariel's fanarts month...so you're gonna have lots of this

I tried to do something different with this one , a different shading, different coloring...Hope you like it

To see my other fanarts go here [link]

Critique by *Anima-dos Mar 17, 2010, 6:12:55 PM

The exercise of mimicking styles is always a very useful practice. It was a wise decision to try to emulate the coloring work of other artist because that way, you have a point of reference that obligates you to break your schemes and see color work from a different point of view.

I see that you tried to give her a sensual look, and the drawing works well for that, but the color and the composition doesn't seem to help that intention. Your color work is often warm and shiny, and it works great for pictures that express romance or dreams, but when it's about seduction or passion, I may suggest you to use more contrasted shades and a warmer colors and taking advantage of light.

The drawing is great, don't miss understand me, but it would gain extra strength if you use every element of the drawing to help you express what the picture has to tell. That is, using composition, acting, coloring, contrast light and shade to reinforce the scene or the expression, you know what I mean?

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